Rough Cut and Feed Back

Here is the first draft of my advertisement for the media academy, as you can see it is not the finished product yet as it is not to a high and professional standard. I am happy with the advert as a first draft as it ticks all the boxes and has everything I needed in it. I just need to make some small adjustments which will add that little bit of creativity to the advert which it lacks at the moment. Below you can see a representative from my client Glenthorne and she watched the advert and gave me some feed back on it.  




As you can see the representative from Glenthorne is happy with the advertisement as a first draft which is a good sign, she gives me the feed back which I need to change on the advert so that the client will be happy with the standard of the advert. By making the small changes I will make the advert more successful in reaching the target audience and will have more chance of making new students join the academy.