Rough Edit 2

Here is my second draft of my music video. As you can see from my first draft there has been a lot of progress, however I will still need to improve my video if I want to reach my target grade. Since my first draft I have added more the narrative, with shots of the performer being controlled with ribbon, I have also re shoot some footage which was shaky. At the moment my music video is at a merit, and for me to reach distinction I will need to re-shoot some footage. The shots with ribbon need to be shot again as I could try and be more animated in them. I will also need to make the doll shots more extreme so that it is more abstract and makes the audience more interested in the narrative. Some of the performance shots will also need to be re-filmed, as they are badly framed leaving lots of head room in the shot.